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14 April 2008 @ 08:32 pm
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I needed a break from a) the Tezuka/Fuji that is EATING MY LIFE b) Chinese 作文 c) GRAPHING AND LINEAR INEQUALITIES D: so I will do a prompt someone gave me a long! time! ago!
...it turns out I have forgotte how to titrate, so I will tackle that topic another day. uwaaaaa ;_; Ms Goh would be so ashamed of me.
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Oshitari remembers that his first advanced chemistry lesson in third year smells like strawberry and cyclohexane.

Gakuto gestures to the empty seat beside him and blows a gum bubble in Oshitari’s face as greeting. The teacher walks past their bench and gives him a dirty look over the top of the wobbly sphere (now inflated to dangerous proportions and obscuring two-thirds of his face), and Oshitari pulls on a rubber glove and pokes gingerly at the bubble. You’re not supposed to be eating in the Chem labs.

The deflated gum plasters itself pinkly to Gakuto’s lips;  he waits until Oshitari is reaching for test-tubes in the second drawer before leaning over to grab the squirt bottle of distilled water. When Oshitari looks up he gets hit full in the face with a stream of water that plasters his fringe to his forehead, dripping down his chin and trickling down his neck, droplets spreading damp translucence across his shirt.

Water gun. It’s super effective!
Gakuto laughs until he nearly chokes himself on his gum and Oshitari knows that if Shishido were there he’d flick his hair over his shoulder and roll his eyes and mutter super lame. Instead he bangs Gakuto on the back (maybe a little harder than necessary, but it doesn’t matter as long as he doesn’t damage Gakuto permanently because they needs him for doubles) and says wryly, I suppose that was warranted.

Damn right it was,
but there is no acid in Gakuto’s tone; they are back in neutral territory.

*

They line up the test tubes in the rack, seven of them, bases rounded like inverted raindrops: if you looked through the top you could see clear to the bottom, speckled marble of the benchtop covered with the carnage of past experiments, yellowish crescents marking the bases of conical flasks and an ugly splotch of dark blue here and there. There is a stain at the far right that Gakuto insists looks like a Pikachu, one ear cocked and two neat round spots of something darker where the cheeks are (possibly iodine), the tail a thin scribble spreading at the end that might’ve been a stream of iron sulphate.

Oshitari thinks (but doesn’t say, because there are potentially explosive chemicals in the vicinity) you are too obsessed with beating Jirou at Pokemon.

Today’s experiments are self-directed; they fill their test-tubes with 1.5 centimetres of different acids and alkalis and drip pH solution in one drop at a time. Oshitari’s hands are steady and his droplets precisely one drop’s worth in volume; Gakuto finds the whole process inordinately exciting and when he puts in the pH solution it dribbles down the sides in bursts, sliding down in a gradient of colour from colourless to orange to red. He waves the dropper around with wild abandon and Oshitari suppresses a wince for the surface of their lab bench.

It doesn’t matter, Atobe’s father’ll pay to re-tile the benches eventually. Gakuto snaps his rubber gloves with childish mock-menace, chews at his gum with renewed fervour so that Oshitari can hear the wet squelch of his chewing when he leans over to grab the bottle of solution out of danger from Gakuto’s enthusiastic experimentation.

The sunlight falls through the test-tubes and fragments into colours, painting flickering rainbows onto the desk, onto their white shirts, onto their worksheets. (Oshitari waits until Gakuto has turned around to wash out the dropper before doodling a flower and a pot of gold at the edge of Gakuto’s worksheet in pencil.) Their teacher nods approvingly in their direction and Gakuto daringly takes off his left glove and dips his fingers in every test tube, staining them red-orange-yellow-green-blue under Oshitari’s disapproving gaze. He wiggles them at the slight stinging feeling from the acids and Oshitari thinks suddenly of gummy worms dangling in front of a child; aligns his hand with Gakuto’s, noting the half-centimetre difference between their fingertips and feeling the soapy dampness of his fingers faintly through the rubber of the glove.

If Atobe kills you later for destroying your fingers with acid and you can’t hold a racket during practice, don’t say I didn’t warn you,
he tells Gakuto, who laughs and flips a blue-tipped finger at him.

*

The bell announces the end of class, and the teacher tells everyone to wash up.

*

I liked the strong acids best, says Gakuto, so they pour that down the sink the last, watching the lazy eddy and swirl of the solution against the cool white stone, thin as water and red as blood.

They peel off their rubber gloves and toss them into the bin. Oshitari’s palms are sticky from sweat but his fingers are powdery; Gakuto yelps in disgust when he wraps a hand around his wrist. He sticks out his tongue with the gum he’s been chewing all lesson at the tip, and Oshitari stares because the gum is now the colour of the gloves they threw away, stretched thin by their hands and blanched greyish-white, and he wonders out loud, where did the colour go?

Gakuto looks at him and breathes strawberry air through his mouth (amyl acetate and fifty-eight other esters and alcohols), shrugs quick and sharp like a bubble going pop. The colours on his fingers are fading to sepia.

He holds up his hand and looks at it, squinching his eyes against the sun. Same way these did, I guess. It doesn't matter, tiptoeing to sling an arm over Oshitari's shoulders.

Oshitari supposes it really doesn't as long as Gakuto's fingers don't fall off.


 
 
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( 16 comments — Post a new comment )
rosivan lex: -HAYGUYS *SHINESHINE*-[info]rosivan on April 14th, 2008 01:06 pm (UTC)
Wagh! Chemistry fic! ♥♥ I'm such a nerd for, well, nerd fic! :D :D They're perfect~ Ahhh, and the scenes are wonderful, just all so very wonderful. :3

Nice ending. XD
eyes with delight ☆: atobe1[info]decollement on April 15th, 2008 12:34 pm (UTC)
:D thank you! I actually really hate Chemistry, which is why I spent all my time... not paying attention to the teacher and observing the benches, obvs.
uralimpiel[info]uralimpiel on April 14th, 2008 01:16 pm (UTC)
See, now titration is about the only thing i can be helpfully informative about, at least for your fic. SPA is tomorrow, cricriomg.

On other things, i see your chem lessons were highly eventful, if you can dream up pikachus on lab benches.I swear, your fics are getting wittier :D
eyes with delight ☆: confused! fuji.[info]decollement on April 15th, 2008 12:36 pm (UTC)
awwww you're too kind, I haven't noticed it yet. I HOPE YOUR SPA WENT WELL. I kind of miss the chemlabs now that I never get to step into one :O
┐( ̄ヘ ̄)┌: ohkura - shiawase[info]kiizu on April 16th, 2008 04:13 pm (UTC)
AGREED, I was looking in at the Chem labs during Jap Club camp and wondering at the dark interior (read: verbally expressing my relief not to ever have to step in one again, but inwardly feeling like Science was a faraway aspect of my life I'll never have to repeat).
held together by spit and coffee[info]laiqualaurelote on April 14th, 2008 01:38 pm (UTC)
I don't know what the hell this is about; would merely like to point out in admiration how you still remember lab lessons after so long.
eyes with delight ☆: girly! fuji[info]decollement on April 15th, 2008 12:35 pm (UTC)
... Like anyone could with Ms Goh!! And our record testtube smashing and whatnots. I miss lab and I miss you more D:
three kinds of lies;: shishido: >|[info]justletlive on April 14th, 2008 02:50 pm (UTC)
!! i really like this :D the water gun! it's super effective is hilarious hahahahahaha you pokemon!geek.

if gakuto were in a certain chem teacher's class he would find himself strung from the ceiling fan by his intestines five minutes into the lesson :O
eyes with delight ☆: atobe1[info]decollement on April 15th, 2008 12:38 pm (UTC)
WHICH, I WONDER. Probably both. I remember Cheryl Teo and Weiling were mucking around with the bottles once and Ms Goh just went over and gave them her Glare of Death and looked like she wanted to laugh.

ALAS, I did not choose squirtle to start, so now I have ember! it's super effective! instead. Which is also awesome la but I think Gakuto is smart enough not to try and set people on fire.
scorch66[info]scorch66 on April 15th, 2008 03:14 am (UTC)
I remember doing that lab! And wow, Gakuto must be really brave...or incredibly stupid. Hopefully his fingers don't fall off cuz Yuushi needs him, if only for tennis (for now). :)
eyes with delight ☆: fiendie@iconsmex2[info]decollement on April 15th, 2008 12:39 pm (UTC)
LAB IS SO BORING cri cri omg. Gakuto... is often both, IMO, hahahaha. Yes Oshitari needs his fingers for Unspecified Purposes that we should leave to the imagination. :D thank you for reading <3!
~Ai~: Oshitari[info]a1y_puff on April 15th, 2008 04:29 am (UTC)
Wah, what an eventful chem lesson they have there x3
Hopefully gakuto's fingers will be fine though, if not Atobe might kill Oshitari for not taking a good care of his doubles partner XD;;

and Pikachu.. on a bench.. XDD;;;

I like their interactions and the scenes <3
[info]applewagonstar on April 15th, 2008 12:39 pm (UTC)
told you so.

imagery fitted the theme.

:D:D~
eyes with delight ☆: from saluchna@lj[info]decollement on April 15th, 2008 12:41 pm (UTC)
told me so? told me what D: sorry I am v v stupid post- rehearsal in which I expressed my love for my future onstage husband totally without looking at him.

is it okay, this? ): I am inspirationless on the Tezuka/Fuji/ Hobby end alskdfjalskdjf.

oh, and, <3333!! for commenting I adore you :D
ataraxistence[info]ataraxistence on April 17th, 2008 11:12 am (UTC)
Hello, dear! =D I just read this, so I must apologize for the late comment. Life has been horrendous lately. I just had the breathing space to go back 200 entries on my friends page - and I'm glad I did, because I stumbled across this!

I now feel kinda nostalgic for my chemistry lessons. xD I used to hate them but you make them seem kinda enjoyable again. I love the little details of student life - Oshitari doodling a flower and a pot of gold has to be my favourite moment in the whole fic. =D

Thank you for sharing this! ^o^ it helped make what was originally a pretty shitty week that much better. ^^
eyes with delight ☆[info]decollement on April 17th, 2008 03:45 pm (UTC)
(: thank you for commenting even though you're really busy and everything! All the J2s are, now. ): poor things *hugs* I hope you enjoyed it, your comment made my night <3 because I totally worship your fics, but you knew that. if it made your week better any I am only too glad to have written it.

I hope you did good for PW! results were out on Friday, I heard. (: jiayou for everything!!
 
 

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